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Exhale another wasted breath
Inhale all of my regrets
Watch the life before my eyes
Watch her fall
Watch her die
See them point and laugh and stare
No one ever really cared
She starts to cry
she starts to crawl
Those hateful fiends she'd loved them all
Now She rises
Ignores the pain
They'll all wonder if she was sane
Dust off her knees
And make a smile
She'd keep them alive
For a while
©2007-2009 ~michaelphelpsismine
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Just sat down and wrote it, checking my skills.... You likey?

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:iconmedium-shamaness:
This is really good. I'm hoping this isn't your real feelings...... I love you AMY!!

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"Always do what you are afraid to do."
If you do not hope, you will not find what is beyond your hopes.
The best way out is always through.
Every artist was first an amateur.
:iconmichaelphelpsismine:
No, not mine, I was very happy today and everything. Still am? Uh.. who knows but thanky! Love ya too!

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Stay classy!
Ayer interpuso el comienzo, el final trae mañana, y en algún lugar en medio que se convirtió en el mejor de los amigos.
Si está solo, voy a ser su sombra. Si quiere llorar, voy a ser su hombro. Si se quiere un abrazo, voy a ser tu almohad
:iconmedium-shamaness:
Be happy! Life is too short to waste it on unhappiness! Some day you will regret living so unhappily!

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"Always do what you are afraid to do."
If you do not hope, you will not find what is beyond your hopes.
The best way out is always through.
Every artist was first an amateur.
:iconmichaelphelpsismine:
I don't live unhappily! Am I unhappy all the time? No! I am a winner.

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Stay classy!
Ayer interpuso el comienzo, el final trae mañana, y en algún lugar en medio que se convirtió en el mejor de los amigos.
Si está solo, voy a ser su sombra. Si quiere llorar, voy a ser su hombro. Si se quiere un abrazo, voy a ser tu almohad
:iconmedium-shamaness:
Yes you are but you need to smile more and not worry about others as much and stop being down on yourself.

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"Always do what you are afraid to do."
If you do not hope, you will not find what is beyond your hopes.
The best way out is always through.
Every artist was first an amateur.
:iconmichaelphelpsismine:
I am, look.

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Stay classy!
Ayer interpuso el comienzo, el final trae mañana, y en algún lugar en medio que se convirtió en el mejor de los amigos.
Si está solo, voy a ser su sombra. Si quiere llorar, voy a ser su hombro. Si se quiere un abrazo, voy a ser tu almohad
:icontheraptor-wolfy:
I think I'd put a comma between "fiends", and "She'd"...
"They'll all wonder if she was sane" I think it'd be better, "They'll all wonder if she's sane", it just seems to smooth it out....

Other than that, I really likey!!!!!!! I love this one! :D

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Meg

Karate people call me- Raptor
Others- Wolf
:icontheraptor-wolfy:
I think I'd put a comma between "fiends", and "She'd"...
"They'll all wonder if she was sane" I think it'd be better, "They'll all wonder if she's sane", it just seems to smooth it out....

Other than that, I really likey!!!!!!! I love this one! :D

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Meg

Karate people call me- Raptor
Others- Wolf
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I LOVE IT!

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[link] <-- If you like to read. My pally Amy.

[link] <--- If you like pencil artisits. My pally Megan.

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:iconmichaelphelpsismine:
Thanky!!

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Stay classy!
Ayer interpuso el comienzo, el final trae mañana, y en algún lugar en medio que se convirtió en el mejor de los amigos.
Si está solo, voy a ser su sombra. Si quiere llorar, voy a ser su hombro. Si se quiere un abrazo, voy a ser tu almohad

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